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    Edit please. A 16 years old Wanderer - remainder

    Dear Friends,

    This is a mini-novel. When Baby Pigtail hated her grandfather, she made a mistake. Certainly she has gone through her share of trials and tribulations, how about you? Have you been through a difficult challenge?

    Are you in trouble? Have you made mistakes for which you canít forgive yourself?

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    Thanks for your edit.

    BMO

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    Certainly she has gone through her share of trials and tribulations, how about you?

    Here, I wouldn't use a comma- I'd use a semi-colon.


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    Quote Originally Posted by tdol
    Certainly she has gone through her share of trials and tribulations, how about you?

    Here, I wouldn't use a comma- I'd use a semi-colon.
    Thanks, tdol, it does look better with a semi.

    bmo

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