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There should be no compulsory school subjects. Students should be allowed to choose the subjects they want to study. Do you agree?
There are many different subjects in school. Most of them are compulsory. Students have to learn them even if they are not interested. Perhaps they should be allowed to choose subjects that they want to study.
On the one hand I think that subject shouldn’t be compulsory in the high school because people should concentrate on the subjects that will be useful in for them in the future. For example. for the person who want to study polish philology, math or physic may be not important.
On the other hand, young people usually don’t know what they will do in the future so it can be very difficult for them to make a choice. They have to learn all subject for few years to have a possibility to choose some of them. Moreover people need to have general knowledge about the world. It is good to know at least some basic things about everything.
To sum up, I think that students should be allowed to choose the subjects they want to study and concentrate on them especially in a high school. In a primary and secondary school students should learn all subjects to discover what is interesting for them.