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    Hi there,

    Could you proofread the following sentence?

    1. Doing mathematics quizzes will help a person's mind to stay clear and logical.
    2. Doing mathematics quizzes will allow a person to have a clear and logical mind.

    Thanks
    pete

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    ---Doing Mathematic quizzes will help a person to stay clear and logical in his mind.

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    Hi shalstudent,
    It is interesting to read the thread.
    So do you think the two sentences of Pete are wrong?

    Peter

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    Hi Peter,

    I am not saying that they are wrong.

    Am just stating that they can be put in a better way. Sorry, I should have added the statement in the beginning.

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