I have re-written your letter. Please try to end your sentences with periods. It helps us to understand what you mean.
Hello. I am Yasir Alib Bhatti from Pakistan. I speak English well. In my country, speaking English is compulsory and we must try to improve our English. Please help me with my pronouciation. Thank you and I remain grateful.
Now . . . we cannot help you with your pronounciation, because we cannot hear you. We can help you to write English better.