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    NewHope is offline Senior Member
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    Improve this please

    "I might be born to be a teacher. Or no, I might be addicted to teach others. Sometimes there was no one listening to me, I would feel so boring, and feel itchy all over my body."

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    Re: Improve this please

    Quote Originally Posted by NewHope
    "I might be born to be a teacher. Or no, I might be addicted to teach others. Sometimes there was no one listening to me, I would feel so boring, and feel itchy all over my body."
    Teaching may be in my blood or maybe I'm just addicted to it. Sometimes, especially when the students aren't listening to me, I feel it's because I am boring them, and that feeling makes my skin crawl. :D

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    Thanks Casinpea.

    Nice one.

    But what I wanted to express is that "I" was a government official who used to "teach" others, not necessary students. So please rewrite it again.

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    Re: Thanks Casinpea.

    Quote Originally Posted by NewHope
    Nice one.

    But what I wanted to express is that "I" was a government official who used to "teach" others, not necessary students. So please rewrite it again.
    This is about you, not me. :wink: Please rewrite it and then we'll take a look at it together. :D

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    But that official made my skin crawl now. So drop it. :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by NewHope
    But that official made my skin crawl now. So drop it. :P
    I'm not sure how that fits in at all. :?

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