Here are my suggestions:
EADS Group division, which is the world leader in aerospace systems with integrated frameworks, spanning France, UK, Germany, and Italy.
Main tasks are: analysing the needs, designing the system and the requirements, providing testing and validating plans.
Analyzing the needs, designing the system and the requirements, providing testing and validating plans for what?
University (capitalization--should be lower case)
(I would hire you.
Personal skills: Determined, curious, strong oral communication, moving.
What is meant by "moving" there? (If you mean that you think you are good at motivating people, then I suggest that you say that.)