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    Default Letter of Appreciation

    Dear Teachers, I would be grateful if you could examine the following draft of appreciation letter to see if it is all right in diction or style, etc. Thank you.
    Letter of Appreciation
    On behalf of the ABC Association,
    I am writing to convey our deep appreciation to
    (Name)
    member of ABC Environmental Club
    in recognition of
    his dedicated effort and contributions during our
    “(Title of the event)”
    charity event for (an organisation) held on Saturday, 30th February 2008.
    Without his whole-hearted participation and assistance,
    I believe the event would not have been
    so successful and perfect.
    Thank you again.
    Chairman of ABC Association

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    Default Re: Letter of Appreciation

    That is very good, except I would remove and perfect. Then it would be perfect.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    That is very good, except I would remove and perfect. Then it would be perfect.
    Thank you.

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