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    Have you ever yearned to learn the knowledge of how a mechanism works, so you studied until you found the answer, only to find that sometime later, when you were shown a new way, what you thought was now obsolete and opened your mind for a new way of thinking?
    upon study of subjects and arts you get experience of what you think you understand. once you think you fully understand these things you are then proved that you do not really understand them at all. the realization being that you must study your entire life to find this knowledge. whatever the experience you seek may be, seeing it thru the eyes of others who have examined before you may help you ultimately reach your goal with a better appreciation and understanding.
    Education may be perceived as taking in knowledge from any source necessary to put two and two together. In turn you are growing as an individual the experience you want to show others or need to live a fulfilling life.
    The future of education can only have one outcome: the complete knowledge of environment and surroundings. It is possible that this may never be found amongst humans as we know them, or rather be a lifetime search in a sense that you may never 'reach the top of the hill'. humanity must strive for this 'top', for in striving towards experience and knowledge brings a well being in the mind, and knowledge for the unfamiliar to start from, giving them a better starting point, already having the experience from others.
    An ever changing mechanism will always be a challenge to strive for. When you reach a certain point you may give away this information to others and watch it grow from where you left off. We must be open minded and take in the information of the experienced to further everything as we know it.

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    Have you ever yearned to learn how a mechanism works, so you studied until you found the answer, only to find that sometime later, when you were shown a new way, what you had thought was now obsolete and your mind was opened to a new way of thinking?

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