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    Hello all!
    I need help. Please check and correct my short article. Please don't make a new sentences because article must be between 150 and 180 words.


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    The Biggest Eastern Festival

    Every year on easter, me and my family regularly visit the one of the biggest Eastern festival in Slovakia. It takes place 30 kilometers from Kosice on east in a village called Dargov.

    Festival starts at Holly week. During this week you can buy Eastern meals, food and chocolate in special Eastern shops. I don’t like that you can’t eat this food, becouse it’s „Lent“. A time when is forbidden to eat meat, chocolates and drink alcohol. In this time people usually send Easter cards to their friends and relatives.

    Easter Sunday is a day of Jesus Christ resurrection. On this day people go to church for a special Easter worship in the morning. I never go, becouse it’s very boring for me. After the worship every people eat, drink and celebrate this feast day. I like that atmosphere. In every corner of the village you can hear national folklore music.

    I always enjoy the time we spend on Eastern Festival in Dargov and I recommend it for anybody who loves traditional values and history.

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    The Biggest Eastern Festival

    Every year at Easter, my family and I regularly visit the one of the biggest Eastern festival in Slovakia. It takes place 30 kilometers east of Kosice in a village called Dargov.

    The Festival starts at Holy Week. During this week you can buy Eastern meals, food and chocolate in special Eastern shops. I donít like it that I canít eat this food, because it is "Lent," a time when it is forbidden to eat meat, chocolates, or drink alcohol. At this time people usually send Easter cards to their friends and relatives.

    Easter Sunday is a day to celebrate the Ressurection of Jesus Christ On this day people go to church in the morning for a special Easter worship. I never go, because I find it boring. After the worship all the people eat, drink, and celebrate this feast day. I like that atmosphere. In every corner of the village you can hear national folklore music.

    I always enjoy the time we spend on Eastern Festival in Dargov and I recommend it for anybody who loves traditional values and history.

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    tomik_svk is offline Newbie
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    Default Re: Help! I need correct my short article

    ok, thank you very much

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    Default Re: Help! I need correct my short article

    Say:
    one of the biggest Eastern festivals
    a time when it is forbidden to eat meat or chocolates, or drink alcohol

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