.Anglika and other moderators, please help me!
Check my 3rd letter please. (Sorry if I made a lot of mistakes)
Dear Mr Peterson, [OR, if you feel he will not object, Dear Will. The other is politer.]
Once again, thanks for replying to my last letter.
First, thanks for telling me everything. Now I'm knowing [I know]more about the arts faculty. Second, I'm sure that my English will definitely improve within [a year/years] [over the next year/during the next year].
I'm very happy to hear that there are quite number of international students, hence we can share our abilities and experience.
Anyway, I'm taking the foundation course next week, so i should [I shall] study well and be prepared.
Is it okay for you that both of us are sending mails [using e-mail]?
In addition, I'm glad to see you that you can speak bahasa very little [a little bahasa]. I really appreciate it.
I'm looking [I look] forward for [to] your response.