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    KLPNO is offline Senior Member
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    Is the sentence correct?

    Hello everyone
    I'd like to ask if the following sentence is correct.

    Annually, employees working in potentially hazardous conditions undergo a periodic medical examination to receive a fitness to work certificate certificate and for prophylaxis of occupationally related diseases.

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    Re: Is the sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by KLPNO View Post
    Hello everyone
    I'd like to ask if the following sentence is correct.

    Annually, employees working in potentially hazardous conditions undergo a periodic medical examination to receive a fitness to work certificate certificate and for prophylaxis of occupationally related diseases.
    I would hyphenate "fitness-to-work" - and you only need certificate once

    "prophylactics against occupational diseases".

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    Re: Is the sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    I would hyphenate "fitness-to-work" - and you only need certificate once

    "prophylactics against occupational diseases".
    Thank you very much, Anglika.

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    Re: Is the sentence correct?

    prophylaxis is a noun for "preventive treatment."

    Is this what your employees will receive?

    Annually, employees working in potentially hazardous conditions undergo a periodic medical examination to receive a fitness to work certificate and prophylaxis of occupationally related diseases.





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    Re: Is the sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by susiedqq View Post
    prophylaxis is a noun for "preventive treatment."

    Is this what your employees will receive?

    Annually, employees working in potentially hazardous conditions undergo a periodic medical examination to receive a fitness to work certificate and prophylaxis of occupationally related diseases.
    Thank you very much, susiedqq, for your reply.
    To be honest, I'm not completely sure what word (prophylaxis or prophylactics) I should use. The russian sentence says that annually, employees undergo only a periodic medical examination and that this examination is prophylaxis of/prophylactics against occupational diseases, meaning that during this examination the very first signs of a disease can be detected and medical treatment in this case will begin earlier.

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    Re: Is the sentence correct?

    "... and prophylaxis will be implemented where there is diagnosis of occupational disease".

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    Re: Is the sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    "... and prophylaxis will be implemented where there is diagnosis of occupational disease".
    Thank you very much, Anglika.

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