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    Question motivation letter

    Dear Sir/ Madam

    Extermely need your coments to academic motivation letter. In this have to answer the following questions:
    Why want pursue studies at the university
    What are my special strengths
    What are interest academic achievement
    What are goals career
    (This must be about 500 words)
    the deadline is 13 februrary I hope someone would be so kind to help me this is my letter:
    I would like to apply for the master's degree programmed in Public Health (MPH) at the Kuopio university starting in August 2008. I graduated of Bachelor of Nursing and Master science of Health Education. I have studied on identification of educational needs of female students toward health puberty and proposing suitable curriculum on my thesis in my master's degree. I am specialized in planning, performance and evaluation of training programs on health care environments. I was also specialized in nursing as long as. I have been organizing training programmes at least the number of fifty. Trainees are all of staff who work in healthcare environment such as general physicians and specialists, nurses, accountants and top managers. So I know health care environments well. I have also worked in different three cities and four hospitals as a nurse and in charge of training in Iran. In addition, I am as a training expert in Treatment Social Security Office where administrate three general hospital, twenty three day clinics and with 2800 staff in province of Esfahan, which are so helpful for this program.
    With increase need for view holistic of health problems, this tool is so benefit for know etiology, ways of prevent and control these such as chronic and infection diseases, treatment expensive costs, equality to access health facilities, environment health and ageing. Beside I am so interested in Optimization, improvement and development of healthcare systems and processes because. Therefore, when I introduced to the Public Health as a tool for enhancing and analyzing the real systems, I found my way and decided to dedicate myself to this field of study, which I am keen on it. Three factors fascinate me to this field : First, the purpose of this tools is promotion and preserving people's health. I think health is the most valuable possession a human being in their life. Second, it is a field of study that really depends on update knowledge . Third, the field is a multidisciplinary course that study anthropology, sociology, economic, psychology, methodology and medical, which I am enthusiastic on it. Fourth, epidemiology health policy, and management are important aspect in this field, which I know them well.
    Furthermore master's degree offers the possibility of receive complete picture of all aspect of field of public health such as I learn about management and leadership skills in preventing and resolving health problems such as chronic diseases, obesity, malnutrition, infection diseases (AIDS, Tuberculosis), children and women health problem.
    My academic performance has been always on top of class. I was member of hospital committees such as Preserving the High Values of Hospital and Intra-Hospital Supervision and Assessment. IN addition, I am member of Research and Education committee and Meditation room committee in Treatment Social Security office. So I am able to work alone or as a part of team.
    On the most important aspect of this master's degree in the university is that the university has work integrated learning and studying is connected research and encourages your students to engage in research when they are at the initial phase of writing their master's thesis. The university offers well equipment with learning and information material for students. The university has an international reputation in field public health, I have always tried to apply theoretical knowledge in practice, and train expert in health science to work in administration, planning and research duties in the field of social and health care in the university.
    I am able to work hard, I love the new challenges as inasmuch I enjoy working with people and know to deal with any conflicts that may arise. I am also eager to learn new things so reading is an important part of my day which expanded my skills of management and leadership. I have flexible attitude If it is needed, I enjoy organizing different tasks. I can work well with team or independent research, which is so vital for this master's degree. Besides, this program is a international program, so that I will introduce with many culture and variety of students that can be so exiting. In addition I can function individually by taking the initiative and responsibility to accomplish my tasks on my own.
    My future plan is to have in-depth research on this field besides working with professional team in the World Health Organization to assess and improve processes health care environments in poor and developing countries. As my ambition is continuing my studies in PHD degree. So that I can share my real experiences and applied knowledge to students. I think it would be a prefect start of improve my career skills and I could build up good. Another reason of choosing your university is its high ranking among the best 500 universities in the world. It also have been rewarded a quality assurance audit certificated
    I am going to finance my studies by own self and help family.

    I hope that I will have the opportunity to prove my abilities in the master's program. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding the success of my application. Should you require further information of any kind, please contact me by contact information on Vitae Curriculum (CV) that attach.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mahboobeh View Post
    Dear Sir/ Madam

    Extermely need your coments to academic motivation letter. In this have to answer the following questions:
    Why want pursue studies at the university
    What are my special strengths
    What are interest academic achievement
    What are goals career
    (This must be about 500 words)
    the deadline is 13 februrary I hope someone would be so kind to help me this is my letter:
    I would like to apply for the Master's degree in Public Health (MPH) at the Kuopio University, starting in August 2008. I am a Bachelor of Nursing and Master of Science of Health Education [from which university/universities?]. In my Master's degree, my thesis was on the identification of the educational needs of female students toward health puberty [??? - puberty is specifically the physical changes at maturity] and proposing a suitable curriculum. I have specialized in planning, performance and evaluation of training programs in health care environments and have organized training programmes for at fifty participants, who were staff working in healthcare, such as general physicians and specialists, nurses, accountants and top managers.

    I have also worked in three cities and four hospitals as a nurse and have been in charge of training in Iran. In addition, I am a training expert for the Treatment Social Security Office which administrates three general hospitals, 23 day clinics and has 2800 staff in the Province of Esfahan
    .

    With an increased need for a holistic view of health problems, I wish to know more of etiology, ways of prevention and control of chronic and infectious diseases, treatment costs, equality of access to health facilities, and ageing. I am interested in the optimization, improvement and development of healthcare systems and processes. Four factors fascinate me about this course: First, the promotion and preservation of people's health. Second, it is a course that really depends on up-to-date knowledge . Third, it is a multidisciplinary course that includes anthropology, sociology, economics, psychology, methodology and medical studies, which I am enthusiastic about. Fourth, epidemiological health policy and management are important aspects which I know well.

    My academic performance has been always good. I have been a member of several hospital committees, I am a member of the Research and Education committee and the Meditation Room committee in a Treatment Social Security office. I am able to work alone or as a part of team and to work hard, I love new challenges, I enjoy working with people, and I know how to deal with any conflicts that may arise. I am also eager to learn new things so reading is an important part of my day. I have a flexible attitude if it is needed, I enjoy organizing different tasks.
    One of the most important aspects of this Master's degree is that the university has work-integrated learning, and studying is connected to research and encourages the students to engage in research when they are at the initial phase of writing their master's thesis. The university offers superior equipment with learning and information materials for students, and has an international reputation in the field of public health.

    My future plan is to conduct in-depth research in this field besides working with a professional team in the World Health Organization to assess and improve the processes within health care environments in poor and developing countries. Part of my ambition is continuing my studies and gaining a PhD. After that I can share my experiences and applied knowledge with students.

    My reason for selecting this course at
    Kuopio University is the university's high ranking status among the best 500 universities in the world. I also note that it has received a quality assurance audit certificate.

    I shall finance my studies myself and with the help of my family.

    I look forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding the success of my application. Should you require further information of any kind, please contact me as indicated on the attached CV.
    Hope this helps.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    Hope this helps.
    Thank for your cotrrection. I sent My cv on the internet. I dont Know you look it?

    Thank

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