Hope this helps.Dear Sir/ Madam
Extermely need your coments to academic motivation letter. In this have to answer the following questions:
Why want pursue studies at the university
What are my special strengths
What are interest academic achievement
What are goals career
(This must be about 500 words)
the deadline is 13 februrary I hope someone would be so kind to help me this is my letter:
I would like to apply for the Master's degree in Public Health (MPH) at the Kuopio University, starting in August 2008. I am a Bachelor of Nursing and Master of Science of Health Education [from which university/universities?]. In my Master's degree, my thesis was on the identification of the educational needs of female students toward health puberty [??? - puberty is specifically the physical changes at maturity] and proposing a suitable curriculum. I have specialized in planning, performance and evaluation of training programs in health care environments and have organized training programmes for at fifty participants, who were staff working in healthcare, such as general physicians and specialists, nurses, accountants and top managers.
I have also worked in three cities and four hospitals as a nurse and have been in charge of training in Iran. In addition, I am a training expert for the Treatment Social Security Office which administrates three general hospitals, 23 day clinics and has 2800 staff in the Province of Esfahan
With an increased need for a holistic view of health problems, I wish to know more of etiology, ways of prevention and control of chronic and infectious diseases, treatment costs, equality of access to health facilities, and ageing. I am interested in the optimization, improvement and development of healthcare systems and processes. Four factors fascinate me about this course: First, the promotion and preservation of people's health. Second, it is a course that really depends on up-to-date knowledge . Third, it is a multidisciplinary course that includes anthropology, sociology, economics, psychology, methodology and medical studies, which I am enthusiastic about. Fourth, epidemiological health policy and management are important aspects which I know well.
My academic performance has been always good. I have been a member of several hospital committees, I am a member of the Research and Education committee and the Meditation Room committee in a Treatment Social Security office. I am able to work alone or as a part of team and to work hard, I love new challenges, I enjoy working with people, and I know how to deal with any conflicts that may arise. I am also eager to learn new things so reading is an important part of my day. I have a flexible attitude if it is needed, I enjoy organizing different tasks.
One of the most important aspects of this Master's degree is that the university has work-integrated learning, and studying is connected to research and encourages the students to engage in research when they are at the initial phase of writing their master's thesis. The university offers superior equipment with learning and information materials for students, and has an international reputation in the field of public health.
My future plan is to conduct in-depth research in this field besides working with a professional team in the World Health Organization to assess and improve the processes within health care environments in poor and developing countries. Part of my ambition is continuing my studies and gaining a PhD. After that I can share my experiences and applied knowledge with students.
My reason for selecting this course at Kuopio University is the university's high ranking status among the best 500 universities in the world. I also note that it has received a quality assurance audit certificate.
I shall finance my studies myself and with the help of my family.
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding the success of my application. Should you require further information of any kind, please contact me as indicated on the attached CV.