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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Unhappy is this a bad english ?

    Our records indicate that there are payments in your account that are overdue, please settle the payment to us immediately, the detail as follows

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Default Re: is this a bad english ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Our records indicate that there are payments in your account that are overdue. Please settle these immediately; the details are as follows.
    "Is this bad English?"

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    Default Re: is this a bad english ?

    Are there many payments that have not been made, or just one?


    Our records indicate that your account shows overdue payments.

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    Our records show that your payment is overdue on your account.

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