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    Unhappy is this a bad english ?

    Our records indicate that there are payments in your account that are overdue, please settle the payment to us immediately, the detail as follows


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    Re: is this a bad english ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Our records indicate that there are payments in your account that are overdue. Please settle these immediately; the details are as follows.
    "Is this bad English?"

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    Re: is this a bad english ?

    Are there many payments that have not been made, or just one?


    Our records indicate that your account shows overdue payments.

    or

    Our records show that your payment is overdue on your account.

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