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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Please correct me these senetence. thanks

    1. Further to the commitment between you and Macy, I would like to double confirm the outstanding quantity of ABC goods and schedule with you. The details are as follows:
    2. For the xxx goods, your figures are not match with our record, please double check and confirm by return.
    3. Please confirm the schedule for us to arrange inspection on 20 Feb at your factory

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    Re: Please correct me these senetence. thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    1. Further to the commitment between you and Macy, I would like to double confirm the outstanding quantity of ABC goods and schedule with you. The details are as follows:
    2. For the xxx goods, your figures are not match with our record, please double check and confirm by return.
    3. Please confirm the schedule for us to arrange inspection on 20 Feb at your factory
    are not match SHOULD BE do not match

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Re: Please correct me these senetence. thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    1. Further to the commitment [agreement] between you and Macy, I would like to double confirm [to double check/to confirm] the outstanding quantity of ABC goods and the current schedule with you. The details are as follows:

    2. For the xxx goods, your figures do not match our records. Please double check and confirm by return.

    3. Please confirm the schedule for us to arrange inspection on 20 Feb at your factory.
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