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    Check my letter writting please.

    Can you please check my letter writting.
    Thanks you very much.





    Hi Will,

    It's fine. I can understand that you're so busy and having a lot of works to do in these days. Thank you for still replying my last mail. I really appreciate it. All your advices and comments are really helpful.

    Yeah, I think it's not easy for foreigners to work in other's country industry and entertainment. It needs a lot of time and hard work.

    As you can see, I wanna take the BPA is because I've the interest in the faculty. I guess I can use my interest to produce good results. Hopefully, I can use my skills for my future.

    I think I can't write any more. I'm going to do my homework soon.

    I look forward to your response.
    Thanks.

    Regards,
    Tom

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    Re: Check my letter writting please.

    jomo27:

    Hi Will,

    It's fine. I can understand that you're so busy with work these days. Still, thank you for replying to my last mail, I really appreciated it. All your advice and comments were very helpful.

    I agree - it's not easy for foreigners to work in industry abroad; it takes a lot of time and hard work.

    As you can see, I wanna take the BPA because I've interest in the faculty. I guess my interest will produce good results, and hopefully I can use my skills in the future.

    I don't think I can write any more. I'm going to do my homework soon.

    I look forward to your response.

    Thanks.

    Regards,
    Tom

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    Re: Check my letter writting please.

    Thanks for the correction mate!

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