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    help me correcting the mistakes please.

    Can you please check my letter writing.
    Thanks a lot!


    Hi Will,

    Thanks for replying to my mail. I'm so surprised that you replied very quickly. Glad to see that.

    Yeah, I will work very hard and if I could have being one of the performer in the Australian industry, I would be very happy and appreciate.

    Allright. I will tell you as soon as semester one has ended. Best luck to you too for this year.


    Regards,
    Tom


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    Re: help me correcting the mistakes please.

    Quote Originally Posted by jomo27 View Post
    Can you please check my letter writing.
    Thanks a lot!


    Hi Will,

    Thanks for replying to my mail. I'm so surprised that you replied very quickly. Glad to see that. [not the best way to say this. Try "Thanks for replying so quickly to my mail. I am grateful for your speedy response."]

    Yeah, I will work very hard and if I could become one of the performers in the Australian industry, I would be very happy and appreciative.

    All right. I will tell you as soon as semester one has ended. Best luck to you too for this year.


    Regards,
    Tom
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    Re: help me correcting the mistakes please.

    Allright.

    Thanks for checking my letter writing.

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