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  1. #1
    SueSue is offline Newbie
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    Default I need help correcting my CV and Cover letter

    Could you help me to correct my CV and cover letter.

    I need native english speaker to check my spelling and grammer and if you have any advise please free to suggest

    thank you very much :)

    Cover Letter



    Mrs. S… Y…

    House Number and Road

    Town, City

    Post Code

    Mobile (+44)

    Dear Mr. N…..Surname


    I recently graduated from Master of Business Administration (MBA) in Finance at University of Wales Institute, Cardiff and I would like to apply for the position of the global finance graduate program (ref; tgfg005) which was published on your website.

    I have academic careers in accounting, economics and finance. I would like to employ my academics experience in the practice with working in a global environment to build a better career.

    During my work and study life I have gained skills and experience that will allow me to be effective and efficient within your organisation. I have worked as a purchasing assistant and as an accounting assistant for X Company and Y Company in Turkey. From these experiences I have gained the knowledge and experience within working in global environment as a part of team and to know how to communicate with suppliers and valuable vendor relationships experience and I also have gained how to manage working with under pressure to help internal and external customer.

    I am an out going, friendly person, who’s hardworking, responsible and organised. I have excellent communication skills and am a good team player. I am native Turkish speaker and fluent in English. I have good IT skills and am familiar with a variety of applications.

    I am available for interview at any time. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you require additional information.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully,

    S…. Y….


    CV



    Mrs. S…. Y…..

    Home Address

    Post code

    Phone

    e-mail

    Personal Profile
    I am a hardworking, motivate individual with experience gained within the accounts sector. Proven ability in working to high standard and meet deadlines Posses’ excellent customer care skill and willing to take on new challenges.

    Key Skills
    ·Communication skills; very excellent communication skills
    ·Team work; a good team member
    ·Very experienced at numerical work
    ·IT skills; Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Access, Outlook, SAP (Purchasing).
    ·Able to use own initiative, reliable, ambitious.

    Career History
    2006 – 2007 Online Marketing Officer

    E.... Marketing Ltd.
    ·Answering players’ questions
    ·Updating web-site
    ·Preparing promotions

    2002 – 2004 Purchaser

    X Company
    ·Searching technical purchasing: spare parts purchasing, building & utility repair – services-office equipment & technical services-repair.
    ·Buying technical equipment (Purchase Order)
    ·Communicating with vendors


    2000 – 2002 Purchasing Assistant

    X Company
    ·Purchasing request from engineering; spare parts / build &utility repair services / office equipment & technical services-repair
    ·Purchase request to order
    ·Opening new supplier accounts


    1996 – 1997 Accounting Assistant

    Y Company
    ·Entering invoice data in AS400 system
    ·Resolving invoice problems
    ·Preparing weekly payment lists

    1995 – 1996 Accounting Intern

    Y Company
    Helping Assistant Manager on daily duties
    ·Routine administration mailing, photocopying, faxing
    ·Invoice control
    ·Archiving files


    Education and Training


    2006-2008 Master’s Degree in Finance
    University of Wales Institute, Cardiff / Master of Business Administration (MBA)

    1998 – 2002 Bachelor’s Degree in Economics
    D…. E…. U….. /Economic and Managerial Sciences Faculty

    1993 – 1996 Trade High School in Accounting
    Trade High School
    Equal to GCSE general certificate between GCSE and GCSE AS level



    Courses

    ·June 2005 – June 2006 Alpha International School of English
    Certificate of Advanced Level English
    ·September 2004 –June 2005 Bexley Collage
    University of Cambridge ESOL Entry3 * Certificate
    ·July 2004 Be A Good Team Player
    ·September 2002 –June 2003 Ege University
    English Foundation


    Additional Information

    Hobbies I am an out going, lively person who enjoys sports, listening to music.
    References Available upon request

  2. #2
    susiedqq is offline Key Member
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      • United States
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    Post Code


    Mobile (+44)

    Dear Mr. N…..Surname


    I recently graduated (with a ) Master of Business Administration (MBA) in Finance from University of Wales Institute, Cardiff , and I would like to apply for the position of the global finance graduate program (ref; tgfg005) which was published on your website.

    I have academic careers in accounting, economics and finance. I would like to combine my academic experience in the practice with working in a global environment in order to build a better career.

    During my work and study life I have gained skills and experience that will allow me to be effective and efficient within your organisation. I have worked as a purchasing assistant and as an accounting assistant for X Company and Y Company in Turkey. From these experiences I have gained knowledge and experience from working as part of team and know how to communicate with suppliers and develop valuable vendor relationships. I also know how to work with others under pressure to develop good internal and external customer relations.

    I am an outgoing, friendly person, who’s hardworking, responsible and organised. I have excellent communication skills and am a good team player. I am native Turkish speaker and fluent in English. I have good IT skills and am familiar with a variety of applications.

    I am available for interview at any time. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you require additional information.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully,

    S…. Y….


    CV




    Mrs. S…. Y…..


    Home Address


    Post code


    Phone


    e-mail

    Personal Profile
    I am a hardworking, motivate individual with experience gained within the accounts sector. Proven ability in working to high standard and meeting deadlines. Posess excellent customer care skills and am willing to take on new challenges.

    Key Skills
    ·Communication skills; excellent communication skills
    ·Team work; a good team member
    ·Very experienced at numerical work
    ·IT skills; Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Access, Outlook, SAP (Purchasing).
    ·Able to use own initiative, reliable, ambitious.

    Career History
    2006 – 2007 Online Marketing Officer

    E.... Marketing Ltd.
    ·Answering players’ questions
    ·Updating web-site
    ·Preparing promotions

    2002 – 2004 Purchaser

    X Company
    ·Searching technical purchasing: spare parts purchasing, building & utility repair – services-office equipment & technical services-repair.
    ·Buying technical equipment (Purchase Order)
    ·Communicating with vendors


    2000 – 2002 Purchasing Assistant

    X Company
    ·Purchasing request from engineering; spare parts / build &utility repair services / office equipment & technical services-repair
    ·Purchase request to order
    ·Opening new supplier accounts


    1996 – 1997 Accounting Assistant

    Y Company
    ·Entering invoice data in AS400 system
    ·Resolving invoice problems
    ·Preparing weekly payment lists

    1995 – 1996 Accounting Intern

    Y Company
    Helping Assistant Manager on daily duties
    ·Routine administration mailing, photocopying, faxing
    ·Invoice control
    ·Archiving files


    Education and Training


    2006-2008 Master’s Degree in Finance
    University of Wales Institute, Cardiff / Master of Business Administration (MBA)

    1998 – 2002 Bachelor’s Degree in Economics
    D…. E…. U….. /Economic and Managerial Sciences Faculty

    1993 – 1996 Trade High School in Accounting
    Trade High School
    Equal to GCSE general certificate between GCSE and GCSE AS level



    Courses

    ·June 2005 – June 2006 Alpha International School of English
    Certificate of Advanced Level English
    ·September 2004 –June 2005 Bexley Collage
    University of Cambridge ESOL Entry3 * Certificate
    ·July 2004 Be A Good Team Player
    ·September 2002 –June 2003 Ege University
    English Foundation


    Additional Information

    Hobbies I am a friendly, lively person who enjoys sports, listening to music.
    References Available upon request

    Good luck; I'm sure you will do fine

  3. #3
    SueSue is offline Newbie
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    Quote Originally Posted by susiedqq View Post
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    Mobile (+44)

    Dear Mr. N…..Surname


    I recently graduated (with a ) Master of Business Administration (MBA) in Finance from University of Wales Institute, Cardiff , and I would like to apply for the position of the global finance graduate program (ref; tgfg005) which was published on your website.

    I have academic careers in accounting, economics and finance. I would like to combine my academic experience in the practice with working in a global environment in order to build a better career.

    During my work and study life I have gained skills and experience that will allow me to be effective and efficient within your organisation. I have worked as a purchasing assistant and as an accounting assistant for X Company and Y Company in Turkey. From these experiences I have gained knowledge and experience from working as part of team and know how to communicate with suppliers and develop valuable vendor relationships. I also know how to work with others under pressure to develop good internal and external customer relations.

    I am an outgoing, friendly person, who’s hardworking, responsible and organised. I have excellent communication skills and am a good team player. I am native Turkish speaker and fluent in English. I have good IT skills and am familiar with a variety of applications.

    I am available for interview at any time. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you require additional information.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully,

    S…. Y….


    CV




    Mrs. S…. Y…..


    Home Address


    Post code


    Phone


    e-mail

    Personal Profile
    I am a hardworking, motivate individual with experience gained within the accounts sector. Proven ability in working to high standard and meeting deadlines. Posess excellent customer care skills and am willing to take on new challenges.

    Key Skills
    ·Communication skills; excellent communication skills
    ·Team work; a good team member
    ·Very experienced at numerical work
    ·IT skills; Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Access, Outlook, SAP (Purchasing).
    ·Able to use own initiative, reliable, ambitious.

    Career History
    2006 – 2007 Online Marketing Officer

    E.... Marketing Ltd.
    ·Answering players’ questions
    ·Updating web-site
    ·Preparing promotions

    2002 – 2004 Purchaser

    X Company
    ·Searching technical purchasing: spare parts purchasing, building & utility repair – services-office equipment & technical services-repair.
    ·Buying technical equipment (Purchase Order)
    ·Communicating with vendors


    2000 – 2002 Purchasing Assistant

    X Company
    ·Purchasing request from engineering; spare parts / build &utility repair services / office equipment & technical services-repair
    ·Purchase request to order
    ·Opening new supplier accounts


    1996 – 1997 Accounting Assistant

    Y Company
    ·Entering invoice data in AS400 system
    ·Resolving invoice problems
    ·Preparing weekly payment lists

    1995 – 1996 Accounting Intern

    Y Company
    Helping Assistant Manager on daily duties
    ·Routine administration mailing, photocopying, faxing
    ·Invoice control
    ·Archiving files


    Education and Training


    2006-2008 Master’s Degree in Finance
    University of Wales Institute, Cardiff / Master of Business Administration (MBA)

    1998 – 2002 Bachelor’s Degree in Economics
    D…. E…. U….. /Economic and Managerial Sciences Faculty

    1993 – 1996 Trade High School in Accounting
    Trade High School
    Equal to GCSE general certificate between GCSE and GCSE AS level



    Courses

    ·June 2005 – June 2006 Alpha International School of English
    Certificate of Advanced Level English
    ·September 2004 –June 2005 Bexley Collage
    University of Cambridge ESOL Entry3 * Certificate
    ·July 2004 Be A Good Team Player
    ·September 2002 –June 2003 Ege University
    English Foundation


    Additional Information

    Hobbies I am a friendly, lively person who enjoys sports, listening to music.
    References Available upon request

    Good luck; I'm sure you will do fine


    That's very kind of you
    I will correct my mistake.
    I can not believe how you are fast.

    Thank you very much
    SueSue

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