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    proofread

    Hi there,
    Please proofread the following sentences.

    1. The change has inevitably raised suspicious that it has tailored its requirements to a certain person.
    2. There is no telling why the government has picked none of them.

    Thanks
    pete


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    Re: proofread

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    Hi there,
    Please proofread the following sentences.

    1. The change has inevitably raised suspicions that it has tailored its requirements to a certain person. [What is "it"? Does this refer to a previous sentence?]
    2. There is no telling why the government has picked none of them.

    Thanks
    pete
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