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    Help with my essay

    Hello, I'm an English student, can somebody check if there's any mistake on my essay, please?

    Thank you so much.

    Faustino


    As we all know, this is a time where the science and new technologies have acquired a vital importance in our lives. The vast majority of these advances have allowed us to live with more facilities and, as a result, to be a little bit happier. For example, Internet, which arrival has involved a qualitative leap with regard to communications, information or leisure. On the other hand, some people like singers or film directors have seen how their benefits have lessened gradually by the Internet downloads.

    Is it because of the money? Most people claim that they download from the internet because they canít afford to buy a music CD or a DVD. Maybe they donít think about the production process of this CD or DVD. Programmers, designers or musicians earn an important salary. Transport, publicity, marketing and printing have also to be paid. All things considered, prices donít seem so exorbitant if we bear in mind that music or cinema arenít items of the utmost importance.

    It is bad for everybody. Although many people donít think this way, piracy is also negative for the users, since they download a product of much less quality. Moreover, when damaging the industry, they cause the no-profitability of the product and its possible death. And if the product dies, weíll end up not enjoying our favourite music and films.

    The really damaged ones. Finally, letís think about the artists, whose life depends on the sale of their products. If we donít pay for the art, their creativity will be tremendously reduced. What would you feel if someone was stealing your ideas or plagiarizing your product?

    Will it last forever? This is now the question everybody is making. Unfortunately, it seems so. People isnít aware of the problems that piracy can cause to those who download from the Internet as well as to those who lose their money. In many countries, piracy is already a crime, in other countries, like Spain, thereís a ďDigital CanonĒ trying to solve this problem. But these solutions are only the first step. We have to be conscious of what we are doing. Those who love music or cinema must feel obliged to help these industries.


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    Re: Help with my essay

    heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelp please

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    Re: Help with my essay

    We live in a time where science and new technologies have acquired vital importance in our lives. The vast majority of these advances have allowed us to live with more facilities and, as a result, to be a little bit happier. The Internet, for example, is responsbile for qualitative leaps with regard to communications, information, or leisure. On the other hand, some people, like singers or film directors, have seen how their profits have lessened gradually becasue of illegal Internet downloads.

    Is it because of the money? Most people claim that they download from the internet because they canít afford to buy a music CD or a DVD. Maybe they donít think about the production process of this CD or DVD. Programmers, designers or musicians earn their living from the work done in this business. Transportation, publicity, marketing and printing costs also have to be paid. All things considered, prices donít seem so exorbitant if we bear in mind that music or cinema are luxery times, not of the utmost need for most people.


    Illegal downloading is bad for everybody. Although many people donít think this way, piracy is also negative for the users, since a product of much less quality is downloaded. . Moreover, when damaging the industry, they cause the no-profitability of the product and can contribute to its possible death. And if the product dies, weíll end up not enjoying our favourite music and films because it will be taken off the market.

    The really damaged ones are the artists whose life depends on the sale of their products. If we donít pay for their art, their creativity will be tremendously reduced. How would you feel if someone was stealing your ideas or plagiarizing your product?

    Will illegal downloading last forever? This is the question everybody is making. Unfortunately, it seems so. People aren't aware of the problems that can happen when they continute to download from the Internet. In many countries, piracy is already a crime, in other countries, like Spain, thereís a ďDigital CanonĒ trying to solve this problem. But these solutions are only the first step. We have to be conscious of what we are doing. Those who love music or cinema must feel obliged to help these industries

    You might want to find some more facts for this essay. It is all opinion.

    How much is lost to the music industry every year, due to illegal downloading?
    Explain more aobut theis Digial Canon. That sounds interesting.
    Can you find some facts about exactly what is the punishment for illegal downloading?
    Why aren't people afraid to download, even when they know it's illegal?

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