This report intends to give some advice about the general appearance of our school. I have discussed this issue with my friends in order to share with you our ideas. First of all, there is no person to welcome the visitors or answer students' questions in the reception area. Also, when a student has to look for someone, there is nobody there to answer questions. For this reason I think that a receptionist can improve the approach of the school for visitors and the students. (How about something about safety? What if the police are needed or there is a medical emergency? What if parents want information?) In the classroom, there are uncomfortable tables. They aren't big enough for the students. The school cafè, which sells meals to the students, is worse than a Chinese restaurant. Many students do not like to eat there and prefer to take a bus and go in the city centre. (What would you like to see on the menu?) In view of these things, I hope that officials pay attention to the small things I have just written, because these are most important. When they get changed, it might be an improvment to the general appearance of the school.
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