Results 1 to 5 of 5
  1. #1
    jctgf is offline Key Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Portuguese
      • Home Country:
      • Tuvalu
      • Current Location:
      • Tuvalu
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Posts
    1,860
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default is this sentence ok?

    hi,
    could someone please let me know if the little piece of text bellow is clear?

    I have already exchanged the...
    My experience was a little clumsy but worth. If, or, better saying, ''when'' you buy yours, you'll remember those little details that, in the end, make a big difference!

    thanks.

  2. #2
    susiedqq is offline Key Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Academic
      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    2,944
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: is this sentence ok?

    I have already exchanged the...
    My experience was a little clumsy but worth it. If - or better yet - when you buy yours, you'll remember those little details
    that end up resulting in a big difference.

  3. #3
    jctgf is offline Key Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Portuguese
      • Home Country:
      • Tuvalu
      • Current Location:
      • Tuvalu
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Posts
    1,860
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: is this sentence ok?

    Quote Originally Posted by susiedqq View Post
    I have already exchanged the...
    My experience was a little clumsy but worth it. If - or better yet - when you buy yours, you'll remember those little details that end up resulting in a big difference.
    hi Susiedqq,
    if you had to grade my original text, what grade would you give it?
    thanks.

  4. #4
    susiedqq is offline Key Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Academic
      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    2,944
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: is this sentence ok?

    My experience was a little clumsy but worth. (what?)


    If, or, better saying, ''when'' you buy yours, you'll remember those little details that, in the end, make a big difference!

    Just these two areas needed clarification.

    An "A" of course!!!

  5. #5
    jctgf is offline Key Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Portuguese
      • Home Country:
      • Tuvalu
      • Current Location:
      • Tuvalu
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Posts
    1,860
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: is this sentence ok?

    you are very kind!
    thanks!

Similar Threads

  1. sentence structure question
    By Unregistered in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: 17-Jan-2008, 09:53
  2. the whole sentence used as a noun
    By hamoodee in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 09-Oct-2006, 16:55
  3. Replies: 1
    Last Post: 13-Sep-2006, 14:07
  4. Attributive Clause - China Needs Your Help
    By ChinaDavid in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 09-Jan-2005, 15:56
  5. grammar
    By jiang in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 8
    Last Post: 17-Dec-2003, 19:02

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •