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    NewHope is offline Senior Member
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    Titles need editing

    (1) Code of the Protection of Customer Rights of PRC

    (2) Chinese sportswomen create a miracle Grab tennis ball gold in OG

    (3) Leaders of three of the biggest airline groups of Chna changed Three ex-general managers retired

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    1) Code of the Protection of Customer Rights of PRC

    How about PRC Customer Protection Rights Code

    (2) Chinese sportswomen create a miracle Grab tennis ball gold in OG

    China strikes Olympic gold in women's tennis.

    (3) Leaders of three of the biggest airline groups of Chna changed Three ex-general managers retired

    CEOs of the three leading Chinese airlines retire

    Any use?

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