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    Could you help me with this short paragraph?

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    Can I ask you to edit this paragraph for me?

    Thank you
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    The land shimpment transport sector needs a lot of improvment. This should be done through the regulation of the road shipment transport sector, floating the general goods shipment and containers prices, promoting competition in this sector and improving the customs' checks and balances at the entry points of the country.

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    Procedures in the land shipment transport sector need to be improved. This can be accomplished by:
    1) regulating the road shipment transport sector
    2) floating the general goods shipment and container prices
    3) promoting competition in this sector
    4) improving customs' checks and balances at the entry points of the country.


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    Thank you very much

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