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Museums are a waste of money
In today’s world, the museum is a place in which one can understand the future in a better way by learning from the past. Museums protect the cultural heritage of the country.
Some people claim that subsidise [subsidising/to subsidise] museums is unnecessary. These people [They] believe that when one studies history from the Internet, one saves his money and time [money and time are saved], as well as taxpayers' money. Furthermore, the entrance fees are quite high for very well-known museums, so that students or young people could can hardly allow [afford] to buy a ticket.
However, other people believe that this opinion is in errorerroneous. If one wishes to know history well, it is much better when one has the possibility to physically interact with historical objects. Exhibitions should be made as lively and interesting as possible to captivate a lot of people.
To sum up, it seems to me that museums are really useful and should be maintained, even thought it costs plenty [a great deal] of money.
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