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    democratsrep Guest

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    Sir,
    I'd like to inform you of the ff:

    I. Instead of April 14, 2008. Ethnic dance trainers requested to move their flight to April18 for they have commitments to attend this April 17.

    II. Initial Modern Dance Trainers that were confirmed had backed out. Were going to replace them with Mr. Jeffreys (-Ethnic Dance Head Trainer) friends;They were also recommended by Mr. Aragon ( Cultural Affair Director).. as follows:

    a) Joel Lamamgan
    b) Rene Advincula

    III.Mr. Suazo, Fine Arts director of Ganjo Academy expects a package of 50 K for their services. Accompanying him are the ff:

    a) alex alimata
    b) Bong Salvador

    IV. We intend to deply the modern dance trainers and the Fine Arts trainers altogether with
    the Ethnic Dance Tainers schedule of deployment so they would start and finish conducting workshops at the same time


    Thank you.

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    Default Re: Please edit my report

    please anyone?

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    Default Re: Please edit my report

    Welcome to the forums.

    Quote Originally Posted by democratsrep View Post

    Sir, Do you not have the name of the person to whom you are reporting?

    I'd like to inform you of the following:

    I. Instead of April 14, 2008. The Ethnic Dance trainers requested to move asked if they can change their flight to April18 as they have commitments on April 17.

    II. Initial Modern Dance trainers that were confirmed have backed out. We are going to replace them with friends of Mr. Jeffreys (Ethnic Dance Head Trainer). They were also recommended by Mr. Aragon ( Cultural Affair Director). They are as follows:

    a) Joel Lamamgan
    b) Rene Advincula

    III. Mr. Suazo, Fine Arts director of Ganjo Academy, expects a package a fee/ remuneration of 50 K for their services. Accompanying him are the following:

    a) Alex Alimata
    b) Bong Salvador

    IV. We intend to deply schedule the Modern Dance and the Fine Arts sessions together with the Ethnic Dance schedule of deployment so the trainers will start and finish their workshops at the same time


    Thank you.
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