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    Default someone check it for me?

    If it isnít tangible does it mean it was never real?
    If I memorize it by heart will it last forever?
    I clung onto a delicate dream that would disappear before your eyes
    Happiness just begun
    But sadness already took over

    i translated it from chinese to english
    just wondering did i do it correctly?

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    Happiness just began
    But sadness has already taken over



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