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    Exclamation I wrote some sentences but I am not sure...

    1)Reading these words we understand what kind of unhappy and ambitious creatures we are.
    2)This uncontrollable feeling is able to torment our life,but it can also give us a feeble hope of a better future.
    3)This research will never come to an end,this torment will never find peace.The place where our soul will be able to say to be really loved is too far.
    4)The question could be if Love is really necessary for our happiness.
    5)We have always looked for something to reach,hoping to find all the answer and thus motivate our existence.
    6)What is man looking for?(a philosophic question,but I am not sure...maybe it is better seeking........)
    7)every man that begins to think about his life,realizes the lack of something important:the need of much more time.
    8)Time,that horrible alarm clock that prevents us from having the Eternity(or from having Eternity?)
    9) If God had created mankind,why wouldn't have he given us the wigs to reach the sky?
    10)We are just small creatures abandoned in a universe without an end.
    11)creatures who desire a complete love that,maybe,only our Creator,if exists,is able to offer.
    12)This art is as beautiful as the ocean,nothing more,and where the ocean begins or finishes should not torment our soul.

    Thank you very much!!!This should be the text for my English composition.I will have the text tomorrow...........please...
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    Re: I wrote some sentences but I am not sure...

    Hi Cressidah
    Maybe I am too late for your deadline! but you have some interesting sentences.
    1)Reading these words we understand what kind of unhappy and ambitious creatures we are.
    By reading these words we can begin to understand...


    2)This uncontrollable feeling is able to torment our life,but it can also give us a feeble hope of a better future.

    This uncontrollable feeling may torment us, but it also gives us faint hope for a better future.

    3)This research will never come to an end,this torment will never find peace.The place where our soul will be able to say to be really loved is too far.

    This soul-searching is endless, the torment will never end in peace. To reach the place where our soul will be able to be truly loved is out of reach

    4)The question could be if Love is really necessary for our happiness.

    The question is; is love really necessary for happiness?


    5)We have always looked for something to reach,hoping to find all the answer and thus motivate our existence.

    We always look for something to reach, hoping to find an answer that justifies our existence

    6)What is man looking for?(a philosophic question,but I am not sure...maybe it is better seeking........)

    Yes, seeking is good, but then you must say what is mankind seeking? (or striving to find)

    7)every man that begins to think about his life,realizes the lack of something important:the need of much more time.

    Whenever a man begins to contemplate his life, he soon realises that lack of time is the biggest problem


    8)Time,that horrible alarm clock that prevents us from having the Eternity(or from having Eternity?)

    Perhaps enjoying eternity


    9) If God had created mankind,why wouldn't have he given us the wigs to reach the sky?

    If God created mankind, why did he not give us wings to reach the sky? (not wigs haha)

    10)We are just small creatures abandoned in a universe without an end.

    We are but small creatures abandoned in an unending universe


    11)creatures who desire a complete love that,maybe,only our Creator,if exists,is able to offer.


    creatures who desire unconditional love, which perhaps only God, our creator, if he exists at all, is able to provide.


    12)This art is as beautiful as the ocean,nothing more,and where the ocean begins or finishes should not torment our soul.

    Art is as beautiful as the ocean, no more or less, and where art or the ocean begins or ends should not torment our souls


    Others may have different interpretations, but I hope it helps


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    Re: I wrote some sentences but I am not sure...

    yes ,that of the wigs was very funny!!!I forget the letter nThank you!!

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