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    bosun is offline Senior Member
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    Default performed in a play

    IF you see any problems, can I have your comments in the following sentences?

    1. When I was young, I used to catch ants and played ants race with my friends.

    2. I performed in a play called XX.

    3. I want to get a high score on the sujbects I am taking.

    4. When I was a high school student, I didn't like my height because I was easily noticed and it made me shy and even tired. But I am now pround of my height becuase it gives me a better look.

    5.I can dedicated myself to urban planning or urban design.

    6.I love myself and i want to make myself valuable as much as I love myself.

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    Default Re: performed in a play

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    IF you see any problems, can I have your comments in the following sentences?

    1. When I was young, I used to catch ants and played ants race with my friends. ant races OR ant racing

    2. I performed in a play called XX.

    3. I want to get a high score in the subjects I am taking.

    4. When I was a high school student, I didn't like my height because I was easily noticed and it made me shy and even tired. But I am now proud of my height because it gives me a better look.makes me look better.

    5.I can dedicated myself to urban planning or urban design.
    I can dedicate myself OR I have dedicated myself.
    Either planning or design can be used.


    6.I love myself and I want to make myself valued as much as I love myself.
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