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    Influences of climate change on our planet

    Influences of climate change on our planet
    Climate change is being considered as a vital problem for stable development in many countries around the world..Every country is affected by climate change. Rapid development of many countries is main cause of climate change .Climate change results in many calamities such as flood,drought,increasing of level of sea water and so on.Flood destroys crops,houses,infrastructure,roads and so on.After flood,infected diseases spreads easily and quickly.It is very difficult for government to stamp out outbreak of infected diseases as well as to stablize life of community.Drought causes state of being short of water in many areas in the world.Drought also makes soil become barren.Plant canít cultivate in these areas.Many nations is facing lack of food.Starvation is common thing in many poor country through climate change.The phenomenon of ice- melting is consequence of being warmer of the earth.That makes level of sea water increases yearly,area of mainland is restricted.Meanwhile,the number of typhoon in a year also raises.Devastation of typhoon is also stronger and stronger.If we donít have exigent actions to reduce damage caused by climate change,our life will be ruined in the near furture.


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    Re: help me correct my essay!

    Quote Originally Posted by pilltam View Post
    Influences of climate change on our planet
    Climate change is considered a vital problem for stable development in many countries around the world. Every country is affected by climate change. Rapid development of many countries is the main cause of climate change Climate change results in many calamities such as flood,drought, increase in sea water level and so on.Flood destroys crops,houses,infrastructure,roads and so on. After flood,infections spread easily and quickly.It is very difficult for the government to stamp out the outbreak of infections as well as to stablize life of the community. Drought causes shortage of water in many areas in the world. Drought also makes soil become barren. Plant cannot be cultivated in these areas. Many nations are facing lack of food. Starvation is a common result in many poor countries because of climate change.The phenomenon of ice- melting is the consequence of Earth getting warmer. This makes the level of sea water increase yearly, and area of mainland restricted. Meanwhile,the number of typhoon in a year also raises.Devastation of typhoon is also getting stronger and stronger.If we do not have exigent actions to reduce damage caused by climate change, our life will be ruined in the near furture.


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    Maintain two spaces after a fullstop.
    Maintain one space after a comman.


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    Re: Influences of climate change on our planet

    Quote Originally Posted by pilltam View Post
    Climate change is being considered as a vital problem for stable development in many countries around the world.
    Climate change is a vital problem for stable development in many countries around the world.
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    If we donít have exigent actions to reduce damage caused by climate change,our life will be ruined in the near furture.
    If we don't take action soon to reduce damage caused by climate change, our life will be ruined in the near future.

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