Results 1 to 2 of 2
  1. #1
    ben9108 is offline Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Chinese
      • Home Country:
      • China
      • Current Location:
      • China
    Join Date
    Nov 2005
    Posts
    114
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Phase work recommendation

    I would be grateful if someone could help to comment my letter as below. Many Thanks

    Dear Client
    We enclosed herewith a revised quotation for your approval.
    In brief, the scope of work in phase I shown in the revised quotation, four existing diameter 200mm fans will be replaced in diameter 600mm new fans. Technically, the improvement works shall be achieved 71 % of the actual total flow rate demand (600l/s) of the ABC room accordingly.
    In order to prevent any interruption of service normal operation, addition of extra air conditioner of phase II are highly recommended to be implemented sooner rather than later.

    Officer

  2. #2
    susiedqq is offline Key Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Academic
      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    2,944
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: Phase work recommendation

    Dear Client
    We have enclosed a revised quotation for your approval. (herewith sounds so British!!)

    Briefly, in the scope of work in Phase I, shown in the revised quotation, four existing diameter 200mm fans will be replaced with new fans with a 600mm diameter. Technically, the improved works shall achieve 71 % of the actual total flow rate demand (600l/s) of the ABC room accordingly. (I don't understand this sentence. Do you mean to say the 600mm fans will acheive 71% of the total flow rate demanded by the ABC room?)

    In order to prevent any interruption of normal services, the addition of the extra air conditioner in Phase II is highly recommended and should be implemented sooner, rather than later.

    Officer

Similar Threads

  1. come to work vs. go to work
    By Nefertiti in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: 12-May-2009, 11:28
  2. Family VS Work
    By kenny101 in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 16-Dec-2007, 12:52
  3. Work Quicly \ slowly ... check my Essay
    By Edil in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 8
    Last Post: 10-Sep-2007, 04:05
  4. Difference between work at, work with and work for
    By Mahnoor in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 05-Feb-2007, 04:08

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •