I am doing an essay on gender stereotyping with the media
and i was told to revise my thesis but not much more. so i'm wondering if this is ok. When i read it the piece flows but I just wanted a better opinion.

Males and Females have been and still are taught today to excel in different ways, by viewing the different forms of advertisements and magazines, then following in the footsteps of those models thus setting the stage for gender stereotyping.

Juliette