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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    I am reach your mobile phone and Eric. Would you please return your call to Ms. xxx, she is looking for you urgently.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    I am reach your mobile phone and Eric. Would you please return your call to Ms. xxx, she is looking for you urgently.
    I am calling both your mobile phone and Eric. Mrs xxx phoned you. She urgently needs to speak to you. Please return her call immediately.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    I am reach your mobile phone and Eric. Would you please return your call to Ms. xxx, she is looking for you urgently.
    Hi Zoe

    From what I can understand you are trying to reach Eric or a 3rd party on their mobile. If this is not correct please advise what you are trying to say.

    If so
    Sorry, I have been unable to contact Eric or yourself, on your mobile. Please ( or your could say...return the call to Ms xx urgently ) contact Ms xxxx urgently.

    Regards

    Stilo

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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Default Re: is this message correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Stilo View Post
    Hi Zoe

    From what I can understand you are trying to reach Eric or a 3rd party on their mobile. If this is not correct please advise what you are trying to say.

    If so
    Sorry, I have been unable to contact Eric or yourself, on your mobile. Please ( or your could say...return the call to Ms xx urgently ) contact Ms xxxx urgently.

    Regards

    Stilo

    Hi Stilo,

    Yes, you are correct, this is my typo.

    Is should read " I cannot reach you and Eric mobile .................."

    Thanks for your correction

    Regards
    Zoe

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