Results 1 to 2 of 2
  1. #1
    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Korean
      • Home Country:
      • South Korea
      • Current Location:
      • China
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    1,627
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Please correct my grammar

    There is only 2000 pcs M60R ready to ship on this week, 2000 pcs R1791 will be ready on 13 May and 1000 pcs R1879 on 21 May. The total volume for these three models are 18 cbm, but we also suggest to consolidate them into 1x20’container in order to save the ocean freight, but will catch the vessel xxx ETD on xxx and expected arrive to France on 12 June. Please comment.

  2. #2
    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
    Join Date
    Oct 2006
    Posts
    19,448
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: Please correct my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    There are only 2000 pcs of M60R ready to ship on this week; 2000 pcs of R1791 will be ready on 13 May and 1000 pcs of R1879 on 21 May. The total volume for these three models are 18 cbm, but we also suggest that weconsolidate them into 1x20’container in order to save costs on the ocean freight. This would catch the vessel xxx ETD on xxx and expected to arrive in France on 12 June. Please comment.
    .

Similar Threads

  1. Pls. correct my grammar, thanks
    By Zoe2008 in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 20-Jan-2008, 21:02
  2. Is the grammar of this sentence correct?
    By albertage in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 27-Oct-2007, 08:23
  3. Correct Grammar
    By Anonymous in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 24-Sep-2004, 09:28
  4. correct grammar
    By Anonymous in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 11-Feb-2004, 22:45

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •