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    How to prevent crime in my area - could you corect it, please?

    The task was to write paragraph about ways to prevent crime in our area.

    There many ways to prevent crime in my area, but the best way, I think, is to follow some easy safety tips, which will guarantee your security. The criminal is always on a look out for easy target, so you have to show precaution to put off his intentions. Firstly, speaking about street crime, keep personal items out of sight, especially when having a meal, do not leave your valuable things on the dining table or empty chair. You should also protect your home by installing security systems. By the way, neighborhood watch programs are incredibly effective ways to prevent crime, too. To sum up, I would like to say that if everybody will follow these easy safety tips crime rate in our area will start falling.


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    Re: How to prevent crime in my area - could you corect it, please?

    Quote Originally Posted by goryny4 View Post
    The task was to write paragraph about ways to prevent crime in our area.

    There many ways to prevent crime in my area, but the best way, I think, is to follow some easy safety tips that will guarantee your security. The criminal is always on a look out for easy targets, so you have to take precautions in order to put off his intentionsavoid his attention. Firstly, keep personal items out of sight, especially when having a meal in a restaurant. Do not leave your valuable things on the dining table or an empty chair. You should also protect your home by installing security systems. By the way, neighborhood watch programs are incredibly effective ways to prevent crime, too. To sum up, I would like to say that if everybody followed these easy safety tips, the crime rate in our area will start falling.


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    Re: How to prevent crime in my area - could you corect it, please?

    Thank you!


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    Re: How to prevent crime in my area - could you corect it, please?

    The beginning: There are many ways ...
    And the last sentence: ... the crime rate ... would start falling.

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