No one denies the importance of the English language as currently a global language. It is clear that English has become (more-omit) dominant around the world. In some countries it is the mother tongue and other countries learn it as a second language in their schools.
This has made English widespread. (You said in your first sentence that English is global - so omit this repetition.)
Many reasons : 'reasons' do not/did not contribute to the adoption of English worldwide, they explain why that happened. So it would be better to say,
have contributed to the
rising of English spreading : if English is already 'global', how can there still be an increasing spread of it? - unless we are beaming broadcasts in English to Mars, just in case.
I think what you mean is:
Many factors have contributed to this
spreading of English, for example, it is used for communication between people around the world,
as well as, it is language of modern times. : I'm not sure what you mean by this. I understand the words, but it seems that it is the language of modern times because, as you said in the previous sentence, it is used for communication between people around the world,
I think it would be better to omit that part, and go straight on:
and is the language of science and technology.
There is no doubt that, the English is language of communication between the people with different cultures . : I would suggest you omit this. You have spoken about global, worldwide, which means different countries around the world, and hence, implies that of course, these countries will have different cultures and languages. And you have just said, 'communication between people around the world'
It is also the language of computers that help to communicate with the people around the world through Internet technology and e-mail. People who know English can deal with the Internet, which is regard information and communications revolution .
I think you need to rewrite this section. English is not actually the language of computers, since they have arcane computer languages of their own! It is the Internet aspect which you need to stress
Perhaps if I do a separate post and give you some of the reasons why English has become the universal language, you might be able to incorporate/include these in your essay
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Also one of reasons that contributed to the spread of English that, it is the language of the modern era. Where the people are use it in various field of life such as, economy, e-commerce, medicine and aviation. In addition ,it is the language which use in the tourism and travel. This reasons motive the people to learn English .
One of the main reasons why the English is dominant in the present time, use it in the field of education by universities and institutes and, they use it in scientific research . It has become an addendum to the mastery of scientific individual stock. On the other hand, the English is an important requirement in most government jobs and private.
It is quite clear that English has become an necessity today. We need it in different fields of life . The English language has become easier to learn more than ever before with the availability of many sources to help people learn very easily. Such as the Internet, books and educational institutes which spread around the world.[/QUOTE]