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    The trials tribulations, connections I have made and experiences I have had. As a waiter at a restaurant, that is sixty one years old and rich with history.

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    Default Re: is this sentence punctuated correctly?

    It's not a complete sentence, though. Here's how to punctuate it:
    ...the trials, tribulations, connections I have made, and experiences I have had as a waiter at a restaurant that is sixty-one years old and rich with history...

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    Default Re: is this sentence punctuated correctly?

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    The trials tribulations, connections I have made and experiences I have had. As a waiter at a restaurant, that is sixty one years old and rich with history.
    Please try, again! You have put a bunch of words together that do not express a complete thought. Let us see what your next complete sentence looks like!

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