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Hi dear teachers. I wrote this topic to improve my writing skills. It's about a dowry and marriage. Hope to check my writing. Thanks in advance.
Marriage is an institution through which two persons can join each other. It allows them to have sex, love each other, share their thoughts with each other , and have children.
Marriage is sanctioned with a government, society and religion. In my country, girls should get married after they have passed eighteen years old. And for sure to have sex and children. And it would odd if any girl decided to have a man after twenty years old.
A man should give a dowry to a girl who will be his wife. Giving a dowry to a girl shows her value and importance especially if she was virgin. But even so, not all of the girls care about it if they only need love. dowry creates a lot of problems here if it was so expensive and excessive. Some families put a dowry as the most fundamental condition. They ask a groom to pay a lot of money not only for the bride but also for her parents .
So it costs an arm and a leg if any man thinks about getting married to any girl. This request makes men abstain from getting married which makes girls worry about their future and futuristic life especialy those who want their men to love them not to have all those money.
By other word, and in relation to the expensive dowry, a family of the girl shouldn't ask a groom over his ability.
Finally, I hope to find a man who loves me so much and who gives me a money as well. Iwish i weren't married !