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    Default Sir/Ma'am Pls edit my report.pls

    May 5, 2008


    To: Mr. Marcel Luvueno
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    Dept of Engineering ( Technical Insititue University)



    Re: Request

    __________________________________________________ ______

    Sir,

    Good Day...In behalf of Meading Coal Mining Corporation, we would like to ask for your permission to let us borrow two of your Instructors, Mr, Lagmuk ( Heavy Equipment Instructor) and Mr. Langaw ( Industrial Automation and Mechatronics Instructor. We intend for them to do an audit or evaluation on our Heavy Equipments and Industrial Automation and Hydraulic Systems... Our managment would really like to know what we do well and what we did not do well in this equipments and systems through your instructors advise and findings. Also, we would like to know waht we can improve on these equipments. Moreover, we also would like to know what are the other power of these systems so we can fully utilize its capabilities..Also, We'd like to know what are the skills of persons that should use these equipments and systems so that we will know what kind of employee we will hire. we'd like to have them look at our facilities on their preferred dates.

    Sir, We really wish that you help us on this endeavor and allow your instructors to help us so that we'll be very competent in handling our Heavy Equipment and Industrial Automation Systems.



    Thank you very much for your time and suppoet for this matter.


    Appreciatively yours.

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    Default Re: Sir/Ma'am Pls edit my report.pls

    Quote Originally Posted by democratsrep View Post
    May 5, 2008


    To: Mr. Marcel Luvueno
    Director
    Dept of Engineering ( Technical Insititue University)



    Re: Request

    __________________________________________________ ______

    Sir,

    Greetings for the day! On behalf of Meading Coal Mining Corporation, we would like to ask for your permission to borrow the services of two of your Instructors, Mr, Lagmuk ( Heavy Equipment Instructor) and Mr. Langaw ( Industrial Automation and Mechatronics Instructor. We require their services in doing an audit and an evaluation of our Heavy Equipments and Industrial Automation and Hydraulic Systems.

    Our managment would like to clearly know what we do well in and what we did not do well with regard to these equipments and systems through your instructors' analysis,advice and findings. Also, we would like to know how we can improve on these equipments. Moreover, we also would like to know what the other uses and capabilities of these systems are so we can fully utilize them. Also, we'd like to know what are the skills of the persons who are obliged to handle them so we will know what kind of employees we have to hire. we'd like to have them look at our facilities on their preferred dates.

    We fervently hope that you will help us on this endeavor and allow your instructors to help us so that we'll be very competent in handling our Heavy Equipment and Industrial Automation Systems.

    Thank you very much for your time and suppoet for this matter.


    Faithfully yours.
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