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    please correct my text

    Thank you for your reminder, I already sent the document to Amy

    Susan has reply the details to Moon on April 16. The amount of USD xxx you received was correct, because there have 5% discounts from the total amount which has double checked with the customer before. Please find the attached email for your reference. Please contact me again, if there is still problem.

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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Thank you for your reminder, I already sent the document to Amy

    Susan has already given a detailed reply to Moon on April 16. However, kindly note that the amount of USD xxx which you received is correct. After reckoning that there is a 5% discount on the total amount, it works out to that figure,which has been double- checked with the customer before arriving at such a figure. Please, however, find the attached email for your ready reference. Please contact me again, if there is, yet, any problem.
    Please use the above text.


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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Thank you for your reminder. I had allready sent the document to Amy

    Susan had replied with the details to Moon on April 16. The amount of USD xxx you received was correct. There was a 5% discount from the total amount which was double-checked and confirmed with the customer previously. Please find the attached email containing this information for your reference. Please contact me again if there is still any problem.
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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
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    I need to know the usage of had . I often get confused with it.
    Example
    susan had replied ..........

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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Thank you for your reminder, I already sent the document to Amy

    Susan has reply the details to Moon on April 16. The amount of USD xxx you received was correct, because there have 5% discounts from the total amount which has double checked with the customer before. Please find the attached email for your reference. Please contact me again, if there is still problem.


    ANGLICA corected passage is posted by 'VENKATASU'.

    DAVIDL has given a different corrected version .
    It is confusing.

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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Thank you for your reminder, I already sent the document to Amy

    Susan has reply the details to Moon on April 16. The amount of USD xxx you received was correct, because there have 5% discounts from the total amount which has double checked with the customer before. Please find the attached email for your reference. Please contact me again, if there is still problem.
    ANGLICA 'S corrected passage is posted by 'VENKATASU'.Under past perfect tense.

    DAVIDL has given a different corrected version .Kindly refer to the thread'past perfect tense-lackof

    clarity' .It is confusing.KINDLY SEE THE THREAD' PLEASE CORRECT MY TEXT ZOE2008'
    Last edited by rj1948; 06-May-2008 at 15:52.

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