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    Default Is this sentence's structure correct?

    Is the following sentence is correct gramatically, kindly rephrase if needed.

    Especially, itís for all men who want to pamper their wives with a gift that will make them happy, a very special way to say that you really care.

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    Itís for men who want to pamper their wives with a special gift to make them happy - a very personal way to say you really care.

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    Default Re: Is this sentence's structure correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Is the following sentence is correct gramatically, kindly rephrase if needed.

    Especially, itís for all men who want to pamper their wives with a gift that will make them happy, a very special way to say that you really care.
    It's for those men who want to pamper their wives, giving them a gift that will make them happy - a very special way of saying that you really care.

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    Default Re: Is this sentence's structure correct?

    Or -

    Itís for the man who wants to pamper his wife with a special gift to make her happy - a very personal way to say he really cares.


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