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    please correct my memo

    We have arrange one way / single boat ticket for you and our consultant Wendy to our
    China office, the details are as follows:

    Date : xxxx
    Time : xxxx
    Location : xxx

    Our company secretary Connie will resevre the hotel and return boat ticket for you. If you
    have any problem please call me at your free.

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    Re: please correct my memo

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We have arranged a one way boat ticket for you and our consultant Wendy to our China office. The details are as follows:

    Date : xxxx
    Time : xxxx
    Location : xxx

    Our company secretary Connie will reserve the hotel and return boat ticket for you. If you
    have any problem please call me on [number].
    Do you need to tell them the name of the company/vessel?

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    Re: please correct my memo

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    Do you need to tell them the name of the company/vessel?
    Hi Anglika,

    No need to tell them the name of the company/vessel. Thanks for your reminder. But I would like to add one more sentence, can you review it again and correct me if possiable. The sentense is below :

    After you arrived to China, our collegue will pick you up at the dock

    Regards,
    Zoe

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    Re: please correct my memo

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Hi Anglika,

    No need to tell them the name of the company/vessel. Thanks for your reminder. But I would like to add one more sentence, can you review it again and correct me if possible. The sentence is below :

    After you arrive in China, our colleague will pick you up at the dock

    Regards,
    Zoe
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