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    [FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']Kindly check the sentences and if require please rephrase it:[/FONT]

    [FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']1. [/FONT][FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']Marathon continued to contribute to Mulund through the 70s and the 80s with over 30 residential and commercial landmark projects contributing in making Mulund the ‘Prince of Suburbs’ as it stands today. [/FONT]
    2. [FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']Ever since the 90s, Marathon has begun to expand to cover the rest of Mumbai and beyond. [/FONT]
    3. [FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']Their collective experience of over 80 years in the industry leads the Group forward into the future. [/FONT]
    4. [FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']Customer delight is our dharma, our reason to be or customer’s delight is our dharma, our reason to be. [/FONT]
    5. [FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']We anticipate our customers’ needs, expose them to better opportunities [/FONT]

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    Default Re: Kindly check the sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Kindly check the sentences and if require please rephrase it:

    1. Marathon continued to contribute to Mulund throughout the 1970s and 1980s with over 30 residential and commercial landmark projects, contributing to making Mulund the ‘Prince of Suburbs’ it is today.

    2.Ever since the 1990s, Marathon has been expanding operations to cover the rest of Mumbai and beyond.

    3. A collective experience of over 80 years in the industry leads the Group forward into the future.

    4. Customer pleasure is our dharma.


    5. We anticipate our customers’ needs, and employ them in improving our offerings.
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    Kindly check the sentences and if require please rephrase it:
    Kindly check the sentences, and if necessary rephrase them.

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