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    Kindly check my para on terrorist attack

    Terrorism raised its ugly head again, this time in the pink city of India, Jaipur. At the last count 60 people were killed and over 150 injured. Terrorists struck with precision, bombs were planted in bicycles and within 12 minutes, eight bombs went off at different locations of the city. It created chaos among the crowd, all started running for the safer places, jumping over the dead bodies, severed limbs, and the scene was horrible and terrifying.

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    Re: Kindly check my para on terrorist attack

    Terrorism raised its ugly head again. This time in the pink city of India, Jaipur. At last count 60 people were killed and over 150 injured. Terrorists struck with precision. Bombs were planted in bicycles, and within 12 minutes eight bombs went off at different locations in the city. It created chaos among the crowd. People started running for safety, jumping over dead bodies and severed limbs. The scene was horrible and terrifying.

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