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    Dear Mrs. Brown,

    I am writing in connection with your advertisement for summer courses at the Capital Language School. I would like to know more information.

    Firstly, could you tell me how to get to a place where the English lessons are arranged. What is the nearest underground or bus station?

    Secondly, I would like to ask how many people do you accept in class. Could you please also let me know details of possibilities which students can use like computers, head phones, access to the internet, etc. When do the classes start? I am keen on sport. I would be grateful to know what kind of sports or other activities do the school offer during free time.

    Lastly, you state in advertisement that accommodation is on premises. It would be useful to know more details about it. Is accommodation included in total price ($200/week)?

    I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours sincerely,

    Daniela Gabriels

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    Quote Originally Posted by popsie View Post
    Dear Mrs. Brown,

    I am writing in connection with your advertisement for summer courses at the Capital Language School. I would like to know more information.

    Firstly, could you tell me how to get to a place where the English lessons are arranged? Where is the nearest underground or bus station?

    Secondly, I would like to ask how many people you accept in class. Could you please also let me know details of possibilities which students can use like computers, head phones, access to the internet, etc.? When do the classes start? I am keen on sport. I would be grateful to know what kind of sports or other activities the school offers during free time.

    Lastly, you state in advertisements that accommodation is on premises. It would be useful to know more details about it. Is accommodation included in total price ($200/week)?

    I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours sincerely,

    Daniela Gabriels

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    Default Re: Formal letter - pls. look through for mistakes

    Thank you very much for your quick reply!

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    Quote Originally Posted by popsie View Post
    Thank you very much for your quick reply!
    You're welcome!


    By the way, it should be:
    Lastly, you state in your advertisements that accommodations are on the premises.

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