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    "Save for a rainy day"
    "Sacrificing for the future is fine for many, but for some of us, it may never come. Enjoy the present, for it is the only thing of which we all are certain."
    While some hold the idea of indulging as much as you can for now, others advise sacrifice for our future. In my opinion, it's absolutely necessary for one to save his future because the purpose of our life is to work for their beloved's benefit. This essay will discuss why people have to save their future by swinging into action today.
    First of all, if we don't get goal, we will never achieve anything. As said, our purpose of this ephemeral life is to work for our beloved's benefit. It would be bad if we just sit there and overindulge. Nothing will be accomplised, thus we would be considered" a loser". After all, our life is just a mess.
    The second reason why we should sacrifice for our future is inside and outside factors. Over-indulgence can debilitate over physical as well as mental strength. Therefore, we would be in a sluggish state and soon lose our taste in life. Moreover, if you enjoy yourself too much, you'll soon get bored. Then you may catch yourself asking" Why is there nothing for me to do?" In constrast, there are lots of interesting stuff awating for you at the same time.
    I once hold the idea of reveling myself in too much entertainment when I was at grade 9. I slept late and let loose myself for about a week. The next days then turned into series of lethargy and sleep deprivation and all they lead to my poor performance on the final examination. Hence, I had to study in a mediorce high school, which I now regret having applied in.
    So, by and large, I believe our sacrifice for the future certainly brings god result. Even if you are nearly die, you can do something really beneficial to your living relations and the living world. After my children are born, I will instruct them not to waste their present doing trivial things which can lead to their failure in school performance and later, in life.

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    Quote Originally Posted by belly_ttt;296208"
    "Sacrificing for the future is fine for many, but for some of us, it may never come. Enjoy the present, for it is the only thing of which we all are certain."
    Sacrificing for the future is fine for many, but for some of us, tomorrow may never come. Enjoy the present, for it is the only thing of which we all are certain.

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    Put something away for a rainy day.


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    Quote Originally Posted by belly_ttt View Post
    While some hold the idea of indulging as much as you can for now, others advise sacrifice for our future.
    While some advocate indulging as much as possible for the present, others advise sacrificing for the future.

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    What would be a good title for this one?


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    Ah, I made a mistake:
    "Save for a rainy day"
    "Sacrificing for the future is fine for many, but for some of us, it may never come. Enjoy the present, for it is the only thing of which we all are certain."
    It's the topic, I forgot to put it in a quote

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    "Save for a rainy day" it is.


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    Hm.... but I'm asking for your correction of my essay, any ideas?

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    [quote=belly_ttt;296208]
    In my opinion, it's absolutely necessary for one to save his future because the purpose of our life is to work for their beloved's benefit. This essay will discuss why people have to save their future by swinging into action today.
    In my opinion, it's absolutely necessary for a person to save for the future because the purpose of our lives is to work for our beloved's benefit.This essay will discuss why people have to save for the future by swinging into action today.
    Quote Originally Posted by belly_ttt View Post
    First of all, if we don't get goal, we will never achieve anything.
    First of all, if we don't set goals we will never achieve anything.

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