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    popsie is offline Junior Member
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    Pls. check my report

    You work part-time in a museum. The museum director wants to attract more visitors and has asked you to write a report, making some recommendations.

    Museum exhibitions

    This report is intended to find some possibilities to increase a number of people who will go to the museum.

    Findings

    The entrance fees are quite expensive. The exhibition does not use computers or other information technologies. The museum has not created a presentation on the Internet.

    Recommendations

    • Decrease the entrance fees - especially for families and students
    The entrance fees are quite expensive. Some families or students are not able to afford to buy a ticket.
    • Interactive exhibition
    The exhibition should be as lively as possible to captivate a lot of people.
    • Virtual museum exhibition


    Conclusion

    In my opinion, is a big disadvantage lack of marketing activities with using modern information technologies. These days nearly every people have an access to the Internet and use it for finding out information.

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    sarat_106 is offline Key Member
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    Re: Pls. check my report

    Quote Originally Posted by popsie View Post
    You work part-time in a museum. The museum director wants to attract more visitors and has asked you to write a report, making some recommendations.

    Museum exhibitions

    This report is intended to find some possibilities to increase a number of people who will go to the museum.

    Findings

    The entrance fees are quite expensive. The exhibition does not use computers or other information technologies. The museum has not created a presentation on the Internet.

    Recommendations

    • Decrease the entrance fees - especially for families and students
    The entrance fees are quite expensive. Some families or students are not able to afford to buy a ticket.
    • Interactive exhibition
    The exhibition should be as lively as possible to captivate a lot of people.
    • Virtual museum exhibition

    Conclusion

    In my opinion, is a big disadvantage lack of marketing activities with using modern information technologies. These days nearly every people have an access to the Internet and use it for finding out information.
    You should better consult a professional in marketing. Here you find professionals in English language

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    popsie is offline Junior Member
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    Re: Pls. check my report

    Excuse me, but I do not need any axperts in marketing. I would like to ask for checking my report an English teacher.

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