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    Smile Poem

    I'm writing a limerick (poem) and i'm not sure if my last sentence is correct. pls help.

    Billy and Molly were excited to build a sandcastle
    Little did they know, that it was such a hassle
    Billy use the bucket and shovel
    While Molly was lost, having trouble
    Losing patience Molly buried Billy under sand in a baffle

    If my last sentence doesn't make sense, could you please help me change it as long as it uses baffle as the last word? And I'm using the word baffle as meaning frustrated

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    Re: Poem

    Try this

    Billy and Molly built a sandcastle
    Little knowing it'd be such a hassle
    Billy used bucket and shovel
    Poor Molly got lost, then into trouble
    Losing patience, she buried Billy up to his a$$hole.

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    Re: Poem

    Billy and Molly built a sandcastle
    Little knowing it'd be such a hassle
    He used bucket and shovel
    She got lost, then into trouble
    Losing patience, she gave up in a baffle.

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