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There’s an interesting story of mine [omit] lodged in my mind. One summer night, I was in grade one at that time, my elder cousin took a big round watermelon on his hands. The watermelon made my mouth water.
“ Wenwen, do you want to eat [to have some] watermelon” he asked.
“ Betcha” I answered eagerly.
My elder cousin cut the watermelon into several pieces. I took one and bite[gobbled] it down, and then had several other pieces in a run. Looking at how gluttonous I was, he said with a smile, “ Wenwen, you have eaten the seeds too.” Oh, yeah, that was true. I had gulped them all down. After a short while, I suddenly had a little tummy ache .
My elder cousin laughed, “Be careful! The watermelon seed will grow out a big and round watermelon in your belly.”
I felt very worried and asked, "Wat should I do then? Tell me please.”
“ Drink some hot water to kill the watermelon seeds.” He advised.
I drank a lot of hot water at once. My elder cousin laughed inwardly. Now whenever it comes to my mind, I feel how funny it is.
PS: It is not my story.
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