Thanks for birthday wishes sentence

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new2grammar

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Thanks a lot for your wishes on my birthday and that beautiful bouquet. Thanks you for making my birthday truly memorable.

My friends had sent me a bouquet and card on my birthday i just want to thanks them. So I am sending them Thanks giving card. Is the above stuff sufficient can you help me add up more to it....

Thanks in advance
 
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Thanks a lot for your wishes on my birthday and that beautiful bouquet. Thanks you for making my birthday truly memorable.

I think this is good but I might reword:

Thank you very much for the lovely card and best wishes. Together with the beautiful bouquet you sent, my brithday was made truly memorable.
 
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